The last English class we wrote a report about a video named "5 techniques to speak any language"
In this report I did some mistakes:
1.- I did not write the word "English" with capital letter. I don´t know, I only forgot this rule, but in the future, I won´t do it.
2.- I did not use a verb in simple form after the modal verb "must". I wrote: "must to look" an I had to write "must look"
lunes, 20 de febrero de 2017
jueves, 9 de febrero de 2017
Lang 8 corrections :)
- The medicine major is so long that stole a long part of my life.
- The medicine major is so long that it stole a long part of my life.
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- When I was a child I always wanted to study medicine.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
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- Then, when I finished the highschoole and the moment to choose a major began I didn’t have any doubt, so I did the exam for the university and I was accepted.
- Then, when I finished the highschoole and the moment to choose a major began came, I didn’t have any doubt, so I did the exam for the university and I was accepted.
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- In that moment I felt so happy, the moment to built my dream been began.
- In that moment I felt so happy, the moment to build my dream been began.or: In that moment I felt so happy that the moment to build my dream had arrived.
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- I began the medicine major when I was 18 years old and I finish it whan I want 24 years old.
- I began the medicine major when I was 18 years old and I finished it whan I was 24 years old.I'd say "studying medicine" instead
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- After that I began my first specialty which I finished 4 year later, I mean, when I was 28 years old.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
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- When it happens, I began a second specialty and I am finishing it right now, when I am 32 years old.
- When it happened, I began a second specialty and that I am finishing it right now, when I amat 32 years old.
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- I love my profession and I realy like it, but now days I continue studying, when practically all my old classmates or friends finished their majors many years ago.
- I love my profession and I really like it, but nowadays I continue studying, while practically all my old classmates or friends finished their majors many years ago.
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- Now, my old classmates and friends are working and they have a family, a house and a car while I don´t have nothing, only my profession, that I like it much.
- Now, my old classmates and friends are working and they have a family, a house and a car while I don´t have anything, only my profession, that I like it very much.
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- But unfortunately, currently, to be a doctor is not like before… now days the people some times are very demanding and could denounce you almost for anything an then you could pay a money that you don´t have and even, you can lose your permission for practice medicine.
- But unfortunately, currently, being a doctor is not like before… now days the people are sometimes are very demanding and can denounce you almost for almost anything, and then you could have to/could be forced to pay a money that you don´t have and even, you can even lose your permission to practice medicine.
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- So… I think that medicine is a hard way and you should to walk fo this way only if you really have a vocation.
- So… I think that medicine is a hard way path to follow and you should only follow this path if you really have a vocation.
Lang 8. Learning to use it.
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