CELE 601: Lang 8 corrections :)

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Then, when I finished the highschoole and the moment to choose a major began I didn’t have any doubt, so I did the exam for the university and I was accepted.
Then, when I finished the highschoole and the moment to choose a major began came, I didn’t have any doubt, so I did the exam for the university and I was accepted.

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In that moment I felt so happy, the moment to built my dream been began.
In that moment I felt so happy, the moment to build my dream been began.

or: In that moment I felt so happy that the moment to build my dream had arrived.

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I began the medicine major when I was 18 years old and I finish it whan I want 24 years old.
I began the medicine major when I was 18 years old and I finished it whan I was 24 years old.

I'd say "studying medicine" instead

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After that I began my first specialty which I finished 4 year later, I mean, when I was 28 years old.
This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!

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When it happens, I began a second specialty and I am finishing it right now, when I am 32 years old.
When it happened, I began a second specialty and that I am finishing it right now, when I amat 32 years old.

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I love my profession and I realy like it, but now days I continue studying, when practically all my old classmates or friends finished their majors many years ago.
I love my profession and I really like it, but nowadays I continue studying, while practically all my old classmates or friends finished their majors many years ago.

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Now, my old classmates and friends are working and they have a family, a house and a car while I don´t have nothing, only my profession, that I like it much.
Now, my old classmates and friends are working and they have a family, a house and a car while I don´t have anything, only my profession, that I like it very much.

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But unfortunately, currently, to be a doctor is not like before… now days the people some times are very demanding and could denounce you almost for anything an then you could pay a money that you don´t have and even, you can lose your permission for practice medicine.
But unfortunately, currently, being a doctor is not like before… now days the people are sometimes are very demanding and can denounce you almost for almost anything, and then you could have to/could be forced to pay a money that you don´t have and even, you can even lose your permission to practice medicine.

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So… I think that medicine is a hard way and you should to walk fo this way only if you really have a vocation.
So… I think that medicine is a hard way path to follow and you should only follow this path if you really have a vocation.

CELE 601